Item 1: Cartoon
1. Rhetorical devices:
- Irony (sản phẩm đa cấp X……. chất lượng chỉ có trời biết ), - Oxymoron ( Tốt- Nổ )
2. Message:
- There are lots of people don’t know clearly about the Multi-level Marketing. Besides, the quality of the goods in Multi-level marketing is a big problem with the consumers. So, the consumer must be careful with Multi-level Marketing.Item 2: Photos
1. Rhetorical devices:
-Metaphor ( in photos, the situations that people are working and having rest is in water)
- Overstatement ( in fact, officers can not work in water) ,
- Irony ( in 2 photos, human beings are in water, but they are still working with computer, laptop- the modern technologies, they do not worry about it.)
2. Messages: the Earth is coming warmer so that ice smelt and our land can be in the water. We will do not have land to live and work. Therefore, human beings must act to protect the Earth.
Item3: Poem
A friend indeed!
By Nandi Dumakude
I have a friend, a friend in word & a friend indeed.
A friend who loves me with all friends being & I love friend too.
My friend rejuvenates me
A friend of my youth,
A friend indeed!
I have a friend in word, my friend reminds me of my purpose in life
I can exhale with my friend by my side
My friend is good to me
A friend indeed!
When my friend is gone, I miss my friend already
But my friend has gone home because I am home for now
But the truth is our home is in our friendship.
I have a friend, a friend indeed!
My friend in word is my friend indeed and my friend in need.
Friendship is all we need & we have.
I have a friend a friend indeed!
………………….
1. Rhetorical devices:
- Repetition: a friend indeed- parallelism : a friend indeed // a friend in word, we need // we have,
- Rhyme: (imperfect rhyme) life – side
2. Message:
A friend indeed is very important to our life. We should respect the true friendships. **************
Reference:
1. http://dantri.com.vn/c202/s202-467232/can-canh-giac-voi-dich-vu-ban-hang-da-cap.html
2. http://tainguyenrung24h.forumotion.com/t188-topic
3. http://poemhunter.com/poem/a-friend-indeed-9/
Your post is generally good. However, there's still something need to be improved.
Trả lờiXóa- item1: 4 people standing over others' necks means the system of the multi-level marketing. The other person standing alone means the customer. So i think this's metaphor
- item2: You should point out how metaphor, irony are used
- item3: in my point of view, there is another rhetorical device (parallelism)
Your post is very unique and interesting:
Trả lờiXóaItem 1: I agree with you, many people were tricked by multi-level marketing. This is the warning for them.
Item 2: You have to explain the rhetorical devices, not just list them like above
Item 3: the poem is really good and meaningful. I think the author also use rhetorical device (parallelism)in the poem
Thank for your entry!!!!!!!!!
In my mind, your entry is quite interesting and impressive. However, there is still something need to be improved:
Trả lờiXóaItem1: I agree with you, in our society, many people were tricked by multi-level marketing. This is the warning for them. But, I think there is a metaphor, four people standing over other’ necks means that the system of the multi-level marketing. The other person standing alone means the customer. So, you should see it again.
Item2: you should analysis Rhetorical devices more clearly. It is a bit general.
Item3: the poem brings us a meaningful lesson about friend.I like it very much.I think there is still a parallelism in Rhetorical devices.
Anyway, I appreciate your job well !
i love your entry.and the messages u send they are really useful and meaningful.however,i would like to give u some my comments to support for your entry
Trả lờiXóaitem2: i thinks in the result of ice smelt is more serious than what u say We will do not have land to live and work, so i thinks u should focus on more
item 3: i think in the poem,it not only help us respect true friend but also show us what is a true friend!
good job!